Tuesday, January 10, 2012

End of Day

Drip-drop
Plip-plop
Splish-splosh
Rainy night in GA
Tic-tock
Flip-flops
Sip-sop
Diet Mountain Dew-aye
Clip-clop
Lip-lock
Shrill-shock
Time to fade away

5 comments:

Claudia said...

smiles..great use of sounds...love me some rain music to lull me into sleep at the end of a long day..

Brian Miller said...

ha your words capture a rather melancholy mood in all the sounds...or maybe you are just tired...mt dew all the way...smiles.

Sheila Moore said...

great use of onomatopoeias! Love the "Diet Mountain Dew-aye"

Shawna said...

You hooked me with the flip-flops. :)

~Shawna
http://rosemarymint.wordpress.com/2012/01/09/crux-matter/

charleslmashburn said...

Very melodic and smooth.

http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/01/10/the-sun-came-up-again-4/