Gonna leave my bed, jump to my feet
Gotta grab my shoes
Slip em on my feet
Gotta face this world, and all its ire
Gonna wear my shoes
Through the mucky mire
When facing the giants, up in my face
Gotta fill my shoes
Gonna win this race
24 comments:
nice...you are quick on the draw...got a nice beat to it...some days you need waders eh? lol.and yes there are a few giants along the way for sure...
Going to win that race indeed! Did you have this ready and waiting? Don't you hate it when sometimes the mire's so thick it sucks the boots right off you? Whoops...guess that's another poem :) Great write!
That's was a bit delightful and encouraging poem.
brilliant, makes me want to don my shoes and fight :)
Love the rhythm and rhyme of this. I can hear it put to music...happy music.
The pop up ad with the picture of Warren Buffet is an amusing companion to this poem -- did you plan that? :-)
David
Could be a tune this...nice & uplifting, I enjoyed! :)
I spent the morning reading about the symbolic meaning of games. You did a great job of showing me the role shoes can play in taking on the forces that overwhelm and win.
A lot of get up and go in this jingle, like an AM alarm bell.
What an uplifting poem. It reminds me of that song by Paolo Nutini, New Shoes. Much fun!
Well done! This has so much energy!
Excellent! I hear your optimism and your energy carrying you along in this poem.
Honest and traditional.
I like it.
:)
Fantastic beat --- you put a smile on my face
A fun, jaunty poem.
Thank you for all the wonderful comments, it inspires me to write more poetry.
lovely! I feel inspired!
catchy rhythm and fun to read =)
What a positive fun write....uplifted my heart...and made me want to run...bkm
this poem put me in a productive mood
Someone has said they like your rhythm and rhyme...I second that; like the up-beat!
your poem had a nice swift tempo...I suppose it matches the swiftness of your shoes. very cute piece...hope those shoes take you far.
Rhythm and rhyme can be appreciated by me. Very nicely done. Shoed me all the way through and it was fun to boot!..haha
great beat and has a fantastic energy about it ...thanks for sharing
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